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Old 03-20-05, 03:01 PM   #11
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Voted For: morse code

Morse:

ill kill this new "buck", then end his obituary with "dear"*
your not on my level boy, not even A.ll M.ost H.ere
^^ name plays like that are wack 3/10
Ill beat you "repetitively", so get ready for a "losing streak"
your skills on the scale, equals your age , against me
^^decent personal 5/10
your lines never connect, like the web and piced up phones
im pacin a flow in a bag, like patients at nursing homes
^^good metas 7/10
like pc mouses your moving no where, cuz you have no balls
althoguh you did face me, a loss will be your "effect", and im the "cause"
^^ first line played as fuck second line wack 3/10
your attempts to rap will lead to "no where", like "trap doors"
a "banana", would be the only time,youve ever been hard"core"**
^^decent 5/10
you wouldnt "shine" over me, if i gave you tickets to the "sun"
closest youll get to winning is a "split" decision, like a "bun"
^^good metas but you worded the 2nd line wrong took awat the effectiveness 6/10
only time your "shit" is on "point", is when "crappin on a pencil tip"
like a retarded 9/11 terrorist, your punches will never hit
^^good metas 7/10
this kids another 50 cent, claimin he started his leader ***
im "cold" "hearted", so quick, pulll out your "hand" "heater"****
^^not too dope.. 5/10

overall: 41/80 (51%)

AMH:

Diversity fuel's ya state of sex...Absurity That'll I'll be in Sig "Text"-
So "X" the thought of AMH Bein'g next...Is Oxymoronic like "Simply Complexx"-
^^good meta decent opener 5/10
Dismantling ""Codes''''...Thats "Period" like when a "Sentence Ends-
Beatin This "Fake Thug Trend" like the start of "Tennis Trends"...
^^wack 3/10
Menace Decends' thats the "Code!"...Stretch-N-bend...Like "Tendons-Mend-the-Joint"-
wack 4/10
Annoint' ya "Book" so ya alphabets "Slick"...i mentioned"...it...How bout a Diet?...
Just try it...My rhyme's is like "Gravity"...u cant "Defie It-
^^decent metas decent multies 6/10
This victory' u couldnt "Buy it...Actually...U could tie it' if ya knew how to divide the votes u "Deny bitch"..."Make up" ya List of "Lied" on victom's every "Five Minutes"-
Leave "DENIED" painted on ya eyelids'...Like blind retired "Pilots"....
^^no idea where this bar ends or starts so 11/20
Tryin to "fly" "High lifts" with extreme "Milage"...Hey flava..this guys ~!~ "Stylish" as a "Pile of shitt"..Wouldnt Spit flames virally sick' with a "Viel Of Flint"...Leave "X" vets"RetirinQuik"...
^^wack bars 7/20

Overall: 37/80 (46%)

AMH your rhyme scheme and structure are fucked up no way i could ever vote for you in any battle with it like that even ya lines up and show where the bar ends and starts cuz how you rhymin is wack and thats being honest

i vote fairly

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