Voted For: final

final - this seemed really deep...never wandered off topic which is really good....you described everything so well, i could actualy get a mental picture of new york after you returned...and i also liked how you talked shit about politics...bush is dumb....real nice topical

Parallel - your's was kind of relating to a war, but it was no where near the level that final was on...all your rhymes were really basic, nothing really stood out to me on the positive side..unfortunately, some negative things stood out...it seemed very immature...you made fun of a girl for being ugly and unintelligent...and you said she has "the intelligence of a 1 year old"...your's wasnt too bad, but, like i said, final was on a whole nother level with his...no hate

V/ final

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