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Voted For: Dex
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ima have to go with dex on this one
archie...you started off your verse, first couple of bars, and didnt even really diss him....then when you got into your punches...they were played or or weak...and you do alot of self-glorifying, which is bad....had a good personal in there i thought....but your verse overall was plagued with bad vocab, poor wordplay, and incosistency...elevate dude...no hate, but you came really weak in this one
dex...not bad, not your best, but you stayed consistent in theree, had some decent punches...personals were blah...nothing speical....but you had some good wordplay...vocab could be better...but overally, it flowed better, structure was great, you took this one with harder punches....oh, that dragon ball z one, haha, made me laugh....so, yeha, dex gets my vote
v/dex
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