Voted For: final

Well all i have to say is Parallel that had nothing to do with the topic, even the way you tried to switch it up to have something to do with the topic. That wasnt about war, that was about not liking someone. If you would have thrown some more description of the topic into the verse you probably would have won because Finals verse wasnt as good as i expected it to be. Parallel you did have some good wordplay and vocabulary though, I'll give you that much. And you stayed on topic....... just the wrong topic:

overall: 5.6/10

Final:

First of all dope vocabulary but i think you overdid it. And all the vocab kinda messed up your flow and your structure. Some lines were really stretched while the set up line was about 10 syllables shorter. But your emotion was good also, and you set a nice picture with the imagery.. Also you stayed on topic perfectly.. you matched exactly what the description of the topic said. Your imagery about the building was great. Vivid picture and definately kept consistent through-out.

Overall: 8.9/10

vote: Final

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