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Old 03-20-05, 05:39 PM   #7
L. Veracity
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werd, I've always liked this beat too...good choice kyd...

werd, this shit's nyce, but you still gotta work s'more on ya flow, you rushed it cuz you didn't pause long enough between lines...flow is the only thing lacking here besides production...

feelin' your 2nd verse better than the 1st, had some kiLLa ass multies up in there, which most chick don't do so heads love to hear dat...

definetly liking the hook, you should've kept going on the end of it without the beat though, shit would've been even better...

go check those tutorials on EDITing though ma...do that and work on ya flow and you'll be straight mami ...
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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