vocals should be a lil higher in begining, cant really hear him
1st dude flow, a lil off, ok voice, hard to understand a few words, lyrics seem straight
2nd dude betta flow, emotion str8, voice kinda.. ight
lyrics a lil betta
chorus vocals need a lil higher

overall 8/10

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