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Old 03-20-05, 08:25 PM   #18
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Voted For: livin-legend

Normal Punches-L.L, nice punches. Some creative ish in there, but some not. Y.S, not that great punches. Unoriginal and not that strong.

Personal Punches-L.L, you had em, they were good ones. Y.S, try some more personals.

Metaphors- L.L, less of them, but better. Y.S, nigga,imma tell it to you straight
next time PM me or call me out so
i can leave you twisted right? Damn.

Multiple Rhymes-Neither

Structure-L.L, better structure, but not by much, Keep working on it man. Life, lotta stretched lines and ish.

Flow-Decent flow, punches kept it going. L.L, decent flow, fell off sometimes.

Word Play-Nice wordplay, Y.S was good, but try to avoid other MC's names. Y.S, not a lot of wordplay. Work on having more wordplay and wittier at that.

Living Legend, not bad man. Punches were nice, but you need to try some personals.

YunSoulja, ok verse. Try some better punches, word play, and personals.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/Living Legend

One Vote. One Battle. One Win