holy shit my fellow crew mem.....that was a solid piece....structure was blah, but it didnt really matter because there was so much emotion, i didn't notice.....wow, i even read it twice, your wording in some places was poor, but the first verse just seemed like it would be a happy piece, then you changed to sad, just so much emotion....wow, that was good, i enjoyed it, made me wanna cry kinda, hahahha, good piece mista.

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