it was aight actually pretty good for being ur first open mic but i'd give it a 4.5/10 u had good flow for the most part structure was really up there but if u have a more better topic u'd probably be better but u were a little simple with it some multis but not much make sure ta increase multis the more the better and next time try ta get more lines this open mic was kinda short otherwise u did pretty good for a beginner