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Old 03-21-05, 07:09 AM   #13
YOUNG_CITY
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

This was a close one to me, but I had to give it to 1step, because I feel he came a lil bit harder, and more prepared in this one. 1step had the harder punches to me, and better wordplay. He played off the personals well, and his personals didnt even need links, thats what I liked about his verse. Only thing is, I felt that your verse didnt flow well, but other than that, I felt you came with more consistency in this one.
KS-yo verse was ight to me, but I wasnt feelin it from start to finish like I was wit 1step. You had better structure, but I dont think you came harder with punches. I think you lacked good wordplay and vocab in this one, but ur whole verse wasnt bad to me. Yo verse flowed better because of your structure. I think you should work on your personals. Links are old, if you cant make a good diss personal w/out links, it wasnt meant to be put in yo verse. I dont even think anyone clicks on them links anymore, but NO HATE, good drop, I just dont think you took this one.
Overall-A close battle in my book, but 1step got it wit good punches, and better wordplay.

v/onestepbeyond