Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: Creativitie
Creativitie took this one with more imagation, better wordplay, rhyming, and better structure. I was feelin yo verse more. Yo drop was flawless to me. I think you came out stronger, hit tha topic well, and stayed consistent thruout tha whole verse. thats why i gave u da vote.
assasin-yo verse was wack to me. I felt like you mad this a one sided battle. I think yo verse was way too simple minded, and I think you couldve came a lil bit harder and more creative. Yo structure was a lil off in most places. Yo wordplay was just ight to me, but i still dont think you took this one.
overall-creatiitie for me, w/ better wordplay, and imagition, and all that other shit i said.
v/creativitie
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