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Old 03-21-05, 07:24 AM   #23
YOUNG_CITY
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This was feedback posted for Golden shellz

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GS took this one in my opionin wit better wordplay, and better personals. No one didnt really have too many good punches in this one, so I couldnt look for that. Both structures was coo, but I think GS took this one easily.
grafh-yo verse was wack to me, i think you should elevate. not battlin in a month isnt an excuse. i felt like yo verse was beyond simple. I wasnt feelin it at all. no hate tho homie
overall-i think gs took this one because his verse didnt put me to sleep, and i seen better wordplay and personals in hsi verse.

v/golden shellz