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Voted For: Hot Sauce
well, easy vote....but not that great of a battle
khoas.....looks like this is one of youre earlier battles, structure was non-existant....no consistency at all, which hurt your flow, and made it less enjoyable to read...you had a few decent punches at the end, but the verse before it killed them....not really much vocab.....wordplay was decent, elevate
hot sauce...stick to your regular structure....haha, this was sloppy as hell....but im giving you the vote because you had more hitting punches...had personals in there....some punches had me laughing,....creative wordplay....although, some multies seemed like fillers....flow was aight....but your structure here was blahh...
v/hot sauce.....harder punches/personals
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