Voted For: intensify effect

all beef aside this is an honest vote....ie got this one, i felt

ie-good:liked some of the punches ansl liked the few multies that were in there
bad:some of the punches were played, also a lot of the lines were stretched, so that also threw off the structure...didnt really like the opener or closer
id rate this verse...5.5/10

wicked one-good: to tell the truth, i felt like this was one of your worst battle verses ive seen, you coodve came a lot harder, the only thing i really liked was that your vocab was better than ie's sry mang
bad:i felt like your punches were weak and all played, your structure was pretty badd too, you coodve used multies in their and some more werdplay, sry homie, but this verse wood be rated a 3.5/10 in my bookz..

both-work on ya'lls vocab...the things i thoguht needed the most work was structure and openers and closers

multies-IE
vocab-W1
werdplay-IE
punches-IE
flow-W1

my vote goes to IE

rtf.........link in sig

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