Voted For: Premanition

damn, dis wus actually better than i thought it wood be...

premanition-good:loved the opener, liked the vocab, and also liked the wordchoice, you also had little multies in there, good structure, and werdplay...seen better from you thoguh, but your topicals are much better
bad:i didnt really like your closer, it felt played
fav line was the 2nd

metaman-good:liked teh name play, decent opener, the link helped a little
bad:hated the closer, it was played, flow fell off, and wasnt really feelin your verse mang
fav line was the one bout last 15 minutes, that was good, lol

opener:P
closer:M
vocab:P
punches:P
personals:M
werdplay:P
flow:P
structure:P

*i see potential in meta man so keep it up mang*
rtf...link in sig

v/premanition