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Old 03-21-05, 05:29 PM   #34
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Voted For: Evolution

metaman

u had a decent verse some decent diss, flow was aight personal was ok but u could of came at him harder and more celever ur punches could of been harder as-well but a decent verse

this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick,
you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,*
text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya,
even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,**
you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member,
change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november,
you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess,
i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,***

decent verse 7/10

Evolution
ya verse was more celever and was hitting harder with punches good flow as-well good vocab , tight verse

I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too...
................................................go put them in the retirement home
This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle*
You’d have to get an alias...
to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles
Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit
His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it
Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time
You’ll never elevate son...
...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme

tight drop 9/10