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Voted For: intensify effect
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Nice Verse Man, This Was Your First Pretty Good Imagery, Nice Vocabulary Up In Here, Structure Could Use Work Man Weerd But Opener Was Nice, So Was The Closer, Overall If This Really Was Your First Then You'll Be Dope In No Time, Just Try And Fix Your Structure, And Shit Man Nice
Durban
Good Verse Man, You Had ALot Of Imagery In Here, Structure Was Good That's Pretty Good Man, Vocabulary Eh! No Man Try And Fix That Shit Up Man Nicely Done Yo, All You Didn't Have here Was Vocabulary You Lacked Alot Man So My Advice Is up On That
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Return The Favor In My Sig Preferebly Me Vs .K.onfliktz
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