Voted For: Texaco

texaco

good verse some good rhyming, flow was good, punches was decent diss was good wordplay wasnt that uch of it, hard punches u lacked u had some but not hard hitting but still a raw verse i was feeling it

Ya bars are more stretched than fat kids and spandex
I’ll prove armada’s gay, he gets turned on from man sex
Its like I got nothing to do, how I keep merking cats
Thinking you could rap, your in denial, like blind kids with gats
2 and 8, claim to be a vet, but don’t match the features
how you retire to come back, and now you rapping weaker
get off mine, you’ll get beat into a serious pulp
‘Excited’ to loose, damn I hate ‘delirious’ folks
get it straight homeboy, you sweeter than October candy
my bars’ll have yo head spinnin like a bottle of brandy
kids wack, 187 my ass, you serious dumb hoe?
Got beef wit tex, it’ll get ‘ugly’ like ‘D.Mutombo’
Ya records not impressing, and you swearin u hot
But tha mack will pat ya face like jack in the box

8/10

187

ya verse was aight not as hard hitting
u lacked hard punches u streched a couple of ya lines
u added extra words and it seems u forced ya hit ya multis would be good if u even them out and for some reason i cant copy and paste ya verse so imma leave it like this

i can fully brake it down if ya want

6/10

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