Voted For: heat

wordizzle...i'll break it down

tony
>This battle is bull shit I'm gone win by a large amount.
He says he brings Heat but Water Guns don't count.
-weak....and self glorifyiing 4/10
>Heat says in a couple months He'll be one of the best that ever lived.
Believeing that is like believing Michael Jackson didn't rape those little kids.
-michael jackson = played to shit 3/10
>So I aint worried bout this kid or that his heat is going to attack us.
You can tell he's wack he mad a crew to recruit all of RV's wack rappers.
-word, i laughed, good personal and best line 8/10
>I Bite niggaz and stay with the heat call me a HammerHead shark.
And bitch you aint Heat you just a fucking fire spark.
weak....5/10

overall: 20/40....not bad man....you have the right idea, but your punches are weak, and some of them played....gotta work on your structure a bit too...keep it consistent for better flow....overall, not that bad...you're getting the hang of it, but you can still elevate quite a bit....keep up man

heat
>I heard you run with cross dressers in Gucci outfits
So your click n drag has nothing to do with computer mouses
-good attempt here....6/10
>No way he’s getting play, with the face of this faggot
Only time he’s bagging chicks…he’s asking “paper or plastic”
set up coulda been worded better 6/10
>i heard u was makin a album, and matter fact pretty soon its droppin..
so imma be burning ya cd.... but i dont mean makin copies
-poor wordplay, nice personal though....5/10
>this niggas like a kindergardeners readin heiroglyphics, u just dont get the 'pic'
even if you was drinkin orange juice,u still couldnt
'concentrate' on a 'grade a' spit
-not bad, decent closer 6/10

overall: 23/40....okay heat, i thought you came without alot of good ideas...but what really ruined your verse for me, was your vocab and wordplay....you had some nice punches/personals, but set ups were whack or wording was poor....but overall, i think you could really get the hang of battling if you keep elevating....work on structure too, spaces aren't really needed inbetween your verse, and keep your lines consistent, same syllable count....aight, not a bad battle, but heat took it

v/heat....no hate

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