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Old 03-21-05, 08:54 PM   #74
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Creativitie came well. Dope shit. Nice emotion. Good vocab... nice structure and approach with the letters thing. But yo, it didnt seem to me like it was a "poem to the love of your life" ... It was at the start but it kinda drifted off.

Flow's seemed more "poem to the love of your life"-ish. Thats basically what I had to make my decision on, because both verses were at the same level in terms of flow/emotion/structure/vocab and all that kinda thing. intel's just came across more as addressing the love of his life. And this was a topical.
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