Voted For: final

Wow ok let me break this down a little so my vote doesnt get DQ'ed

Final: good verse as usual.. good wordplay and consistency. I dont really like the topic but i guess you made it work for you. Emotion was decent, some really good imagery lines and some not so great ones but still decent.. Vocab was good also, once again could have been better.

Overall: 7.9/10

CopyWrite:

Your verse was utterly wack for this one reason: Too much vocabulary, i couldnt tell if you were writing about this topic or something completely wrong because you over did it with the vocab. And your rhyme scheme was so terrible as were your set ups. I mean half the words were in the wrong spots, there were no commas to signify the end of the brief sentence, so it was ongoing and that made it worse.

divine addictions twined restrictions doomed prescriptions homeless evictions
all mark the end of a era unforgetable hard saught thoughts revinve deaths enetible

All that vocab and it was pointless.. didnt rhyme made no sense and plain wack. Put some emotion and imagery in there.. And how about you keep the topic in mind while writing it would help you stop from doing this sstupid shit. You will never win a battle if you overdo the vocab.

Overall: 2.8/10

Vote: Final

obviously

and if anyone votes otherwises its a crock. Because that other guy does not know a real topical verse if it smacked him in the face. It was all vocab nothing else. That isnt a topical piece its a fucking dictionary lol.

Return the favor with an honest vote on any battle in my sig. TY

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