Voted For: Parallel

Hmm.. this is a pretty good battle..

DQ: your verse was pretty good.. well actually honesty.. it was okay.. you had the good vocab.. but not really the imagery as you usually would have.. I could really imagine what you were saying or feel any emotion.. and the ending was what most people woulda used.. so u weren't as creative as ur usual self..

parallel.. haha... didn't know i was talking to u?? maybe we'll battle someday agen... but yeah.. your verse was pretty good... it's better then most.. but yeah.. i could really imagine your verse alot.. and the emotion was really on point.. though the vocab wasn't good.. it wasn't really needed.. really no need for ne help on this one..

vote: Par

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