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Old 03-21-05, 09:40 PM   #28
A_M_H
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this was an ok battle here

Dice: you practically took this one here mayn,
the flow was on point, and not chopped up lookin
the vocab was good, and no mispelled words either
overall u had a nice story, and stayed on topic

Blaze:eh you had a pretty decent story here too
your flow was on point, and the vocab was good
u need a font-change though...but thats me
but anyway, u had a good story too, just that
to me it wasnt as good as shadow's story tho

make sure 2 return the favor