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Old 03-22-05, 12:48 AM   #10
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Voted For: Tony Green

aiight fair battle this is how i saw it...
tony - your verse was pretty good homie..

This battle is bull shit I'm gone win by a large amount.
He says he brings Heat but Water Guns don't count.
^^ this was an aiight opener, coulda been better than "water guns"

Heat says in a couple months He'll be one of the best that ever lived.
Believeing that is like believing Michael Jackson didn't rape those little kids
^^ this was a nice punch hit hard and on target..

So I aint worried bout this kid or that his heat is going to attack us.
You can tell he's wack he mad a crew to recruit all of RV's wack rappers.
^^ aiight bar, coulda worked on it a bit more..

I Bite niggaz and stay with the heat call me a HammerHead shark.
And bitch you aint Heat you just a fucking fire spark.
^^ thats a damn nice finisha good work homie...

Heat - your verse needs structure and betta punches...

I heard you run with cross dressers in Gucci outfits
So your click n drag has nothing to do with computer mouses
^^ that was a pretty weak opener, to played...

No way he’s getting play, with the face of this faggot
Only time he’s bagging chicks…he’s asking “paper or plastic”
^^ thats an aiight bar, you coulda worked on it a bit harder..

i heard u was makin a album, and matter fact pretty soon its droppin..
so imma be burning ya cd.... but i dont mean makin copies
^^ good bar, nice work on dis one... best of ya verse..

this niggas like a kindergardeners readin heiroglyphics, u just dont get the 'pic'
even if you was drinkin orange juice,u still couldnt
'concentrate' on a 'grade a' spit
^^ good finisher.. i liked that...

opener - Tony
closer - Heat
flow - tony
punches - tony
vocab - tony
structure - tony
vote - tony

no hate... its how i saw it...