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Old 03-22-05, 08:53 AM   #57
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Voted For: Prophysics

this one easily goes to prophysics

prophysics-good:loved your verse, espesially for a free...the punches hit hard, they made me laugh too (good thing), good structure, very good opener, good flow too
bad:i felt like only one thing weas bad for your verse, it seemed like it started great but started getting worser, therefore the closer wasnt too good, but thats about all


murdz-good:i liked your vocab in this verse
bad:your structure and flow were off, the punches didnt hit hard, i also felt like you were doing way too much self glorification, elev8 bra

both-both shoood try to have more multies, and try to work on yalls closers

opener-P
closer-Tie
strucutre-P
vocab-M
flow-P
punches-P
werdplay-P

my vote eassily goes to proph
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