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Old 03-22-05, 09:43 AM   #12
A_M_H
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

LyricalMa$tamind:
man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv'e seen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativty a bit there was a few good metaphores but nothin' so creative you know i just felt it lacked that..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man

Tak-Ova
that was ok man but you need elevation in your vocab was not betta then L.M. and your stucture and flow is needs work now..the creativty and metas were not there didn't c ne of imagery there was very ight verse from you i shoulda been looking alot more cause your gettin better...damn good job...

opener: L.M.
closer: L.M.
metas: L.M.
Imagery: L.M.
flow: L.M.
stucture: Tak-Ova
creativty: L.M.
win/ LyricalMa$tamind
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