Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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Voted For: Spektikul
dis battle is hilarious and a real close one...i'll jus explain tha best/worst lines...here ya go
spek:
best..."This is a one sided rally provided Cali's dickriders dont contribute
Thinks he's phat, check all the links this kat needs to distibute
Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border
He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order"
^^^too fuckin funny...great use of wordplay and structure 4real
worst..."Your audio is gaudy yo, You aint rapping in ya mic...you just abuse it
Have you ever heard of talent? You should look for it so you can use it"
^^^seemed like it was forced...and it was a played line outta nowhere cuz tha rest is typically original
cali:
best..."Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastard
You just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'......call me the chessmaster!!"
^^^perfect ass closer...even tho tha structure of it threw me off
worst..."Pardon me munchkin this a tall order you small package
Big things in small sizes.......ya verse holds a immeasurable amount of wackness"
^^^was iight but there u go again wit dat space and shit
opener: spek
closer: cali
structure: spek
vocab: -tied-
punches: spek
personals: spek
overall...my vote goes to spek...it was a good ass battle though...pz
-DB
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