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Old 03-22-05, 04:27 PM   #10
Germ
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From: Adanac
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wordizzle to this piece....emotion...was feeling, reminds me of things ive seen in alotta ways...easy to relate to, because we have all gone through this, either the one being bullied or the bullyier...you put things nicely into perspective and was easy to obtain an image of what was happening....although, some lines (a little criticism) seemed poorly worded and the flow was off a little....but overall, very nice drop...i enjoyed it, keep up, keep writing, good job............(ps, check out my piece)...thanks
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