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Old 03-22-05, 04:38 PM   #21
LyricalMa$tamind
.:Lyrically Unbeatable:.
 
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rhymatikz
Im outta his league, like seeds tryina take marijuana’s prestige
This herb aint dope! Ya words don’t even match up to one leaf
Spits seductive? Makes sense, DOE BAGZ beggin for a striptease
Fuck spittin, to defeat your keys all I need to do is sneeze!
Can you compete? guess not! ya verse juss spells out defeat
Im heat, my text splits ya beats when my arrangement of letters meet
Im proving you aint king, this quickthings already got ya drooling
Ya got me snoozing, Ill give this wannabe a lesson in veterinary schooling
‘This’ ‘punk’ ‘sits’ ‘here’ ‘with’ ‘his’ ‘book’ ‘of’ ‘puns’ ‘but’ ‘ his’ ‘styles’ ‘decayed’
You gay, AINT YOU HEARD THAT YOUR WORDPLAY IS JUST PLAYED!
I drop shit like im excretin, dish a few lessons to this uneducated cretin
You searing? Couldn’t drop hot shit if you mishandled central heatin
Cant drop keys like they stuck on a ring, wont see tomorrow ‘ding ding’
Rockin a paperclip necklace is the closest you'll ever get to even fake bling
Im bringin heat, my words hittin are parallel to devilry photosynthesisin
He thought i was gonna lose this battle but he dont kno im good at conivin

feelin da rhymes
liked how u connected dem wit ur otha rhymes
u made it flo
good structure
easy 2 read
work on elevatin

8.5/10

Doe Bagz
nigga get outta here wit all dat u ripped me shit
when all u do is buy net glocks, u a yung ass bitch*
immature as hell tryin to learn karate stylez online
battlin u is a waste, nigga u owe me my time**
bullet proof vests wont save ya heart if i decide to shank ya
leave u lumped and weaker than ya flows r in da trunk of a raca***
dont fuck wit me homie cuz doe bagz is a real G
and besides dis lose tha only thang dats next is ya boy on his knees****

iight verse
not alot of punches
pretty good structure
got sum hits on opponent
liked ur elevation

8/10

my v/ rythmatikz b/c of harder punches
no hate doe bagz

ay yall check out da 2nd link below and holla bck on my hot battle b/w tak-ova elaborate da battle and vote
PEACE!
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