Voted For: EmIn3m

emin3m
Fake fuck ain't straight kid....yo, he seems to be gay
Cause he stuffs himself with beef just to be MetEoR-K
Leave ya beaten today....best believe I'll pound ya face
Thinking he's intergalactic.....too bad he's just outta space
Leaving ya down, disgraced.....who the fuck think this geek is big?
We all know how much you envy me.....'specially when we peep ya sig
The shit is deep, ya dig?.....fucking jerk, I'm stabbin ya eyes
Had to make his name that way just so the MERK can capitolize
Killing spree had to start with you......family's grieving with no hug
It's like I'm giving up cocaine......the way I'm leaving ya skull drug

liked da punches u threw at him
liked da eminem lines
good structure
tried 2 cram lines doe

8/10

meteor
y wannabe, this is the real aftermath
We done with wankstas, aint nothin after that
Go call Dre and tell him to produce another hit
As long as it aint a song about your mothers shit
As close as you come to the 'dirty dozen' is STDs
While I'm up in the club with all the MVPs
Your my toy soldier about to get put back on the shelf
How you Eminem, when you are black what the hell
So will the real Slim Shady please stand up
For posin' as Em, Dre will stab you like Young Buck

not as many hits on opponent
like structure and nice closure
work on elevatin

7/10

my v/ emin3m
no hate meteor k

ay yall check out my battle against tak ova
holla back it was a tight battle
elaborate and vote 4 betta verse

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