Voted For: MaRVJay1009

very impresed ofr someone ive never heard of before, i think your an alias, but you still didnt get this one mang

orion.-good:loved the closer, liked the multies too, also had a lot of good punches and werdplay also....but you DO have hard comp.
bad:didnt like the opener, i also fetl like towards the beginning, every OTHER line had a good punch but the foloowing line was just there to rhyme and wasnt really useful...you also had a FEW strecthed lines

marvjay-good:you fail to let me down man, i believe your one of the best on rv, loved teh opening second line, nice opner, good closer too, GODDAMN< this kid is crazy wit the punches and werdplay, that lebron james line and the iv one were astounding, you definitly took it in this category even though your opponent had good ones too...
bad-only thing i think you coodve improved was multies and vocab, but thats bout it

openr-M
closer-O
punches-M
werdplay-M
structure-M
flow-Tie
vocab-O
multies-O

my vote goes to marv
rtf...link in sig

v/marvjay1009