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Voted For: EmIn3m
well, heres what i saw
meteor....your shit was kinda lame, you never really used anything creative against him....kinda just played off his name the whole time, and alot of weak shit was formed...plus you had alot of filler lines, and lines that didn't punch....like....im in the club with all the MVP's or whatever.....no, sorry, plus, i thought you had alot of fake personals...do you know he's black? but thats just me......you had alot of potential for making some lines work, but wordplay and vocab killed you hardcore.......anyways, alot of shit was actually about eminem and dre or whatever, which wasnt pucnhes......so yeah, elevate
eminem...not bad, some stuff was played or weak....but had a few nice lines...and the fact you actually were dissing him....plus you had some good creativity, wordplay was decent......structure was a little blah at times....but overall it wasn't bad
The shit is deep, ya dig?.....fucking jerk, I'm stabbin ya eyes
Had to make his name that way just so the MERK can capitolize
^ good shit right there....haha
v/eminem....for better punches/personals.....more creativity/complexity
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