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Old 03-22-05, 05:24 PM   #12
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Voted For: Hot Sauce

aight check this shit

hot sauce, u had a nice verse but seriously, work on the structure cuz it is fucked, it is difficult to read and you have to go over it once or twice to see the rhymes. ure lyrics were pretty gud though, some nice punches that had good pwer, u hit him wit the personals and ripped him pretty well. just work on that structure and get a flow goin and u'll go far. 6/10

khaos, ure shit was too basic, u need to elevate ure game son. the flow was on and structure wise u was pretty ill. ure punches though were just too basic, need to get more complex, use better wordplay and shit and hit with harder personals. and that r kelly shit is played like fuck. sorry dawg but a weak drop, u need to elevate son......a lot!!! 4/10

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