Thread: Love Till Death
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Old 03-22-05, 05:57 PM   #7
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From: Adanac
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wordizzle....this would make a good song probs....lyrics were good, vocab and wordplay decent....i think the 3rd verse was the best, for flow anyways, it was fast pace and really topped off your piece nicely....overall, not a bad drop...some lines seemed stretched, but that don't matter, you're a good writer and this wasnt a bad piece at all...enjoyed it....la la la....
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