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Old 03-22-05, 07:20 PM   #19
YOUNG_CITY
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Voted For: Orion.

O-Even though you had a little bit of stretched lines, I still think you took this one. You came harder, and more prepared in this one to me. I was feeling you mettaphores esp. in this one. That's where I felt you won this battle at. But you did have a few good personals in there, and a punch or 2.
Marv-Your verse was a lil un-organized to me. I felt like it was done too quick. I was feeling it tho. You came harder wit some decent punches, but your structure took that all off for you. Mettas werent really that good, and I really didnt see too many good personals, but your rhyming were nice. Not too unpredictable.
Overall-I think I'm going to give this one to Orion. I think he came a lil bit harder. His mettaphores did it in this one. Marv, work on the flow of your verse, and you wouldve got my vote, but this one was a close one.