Voted For: Cinema

oh dear, this was a shame for Ghoste cos i could see the potential but the punches wasnt connecting good.

opener was really weak from Ghoste, the rhyme wasnt good and the punch didnt hit hard. I think the metaphor needs to be more in touch with wat your writing.
Cinema had a nice opener. hit nicely and good metaphor.
Second bar was much the same. I wasnt feeling Ghoste's contribution here. The rhyme didnt even pull off well. Cinema's was nice punch that i enjoyed.
Closer was good from Ghoste. By far your best bar. Cinema's was ok too and had a nice personal but ghoste's close may have been a little better.

Overall Cinema by a long shot. If ghoste had the quality of the closer in the rest it mite av done well

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