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Okay Here's Some Tips Try Not To Seperate Bars We Can Count Them Our Selves, Punches, Try To Work On Punches, Coz It Wasn't Hitting Hard Man, Personals Hmm, Work On That As Well, The Flow Was Good, Vocabulary You Need To Work On That As Well Man Weerd, Over All This Was Cool For A New Member, Read OMB's Tutorials
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Okay You Have No Punches Period Man, Either Your Whacked Or There Just Not Connecting, Anyhow, Personals Wow! Man If You Need Elevation Hit Me Up, Vocabular Well Man You Need To Elevate On That As Well No Hate, Structure Was Your Best Here Man Weerd
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Return The Favor Me Vs Escobar In My Sig You Explain That Shit To Hommie, Like Over 500 Charactors
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