Voted For: Murdz

Firstly can i say that if this was an audio battle it would be a lot closer. Cos dfunk has the ideas but not for a text battle.

opener: dfunk's was sorta good but the words were the same at the end of each line so that lost marks. Murdz had nice metaphor about sauna and hard hitting punch.

Closer: dfunks was again moe of a street battle freestyle. Murdz had an aight closer but has to remember that battle and rattle is rhymed all the time so wont get anything for originality but still better than your counterpart's.

Like i say dfunk had a freestyle street verse, not an RV text verse. The flow was good, structure was off. Punches were alrite, only the Elton John one stuck out really. Best advice i can give is to read some other battles by cats and learn from wat they do.

Murdz, top drop from you. Packed wiv good metaphors and hard hitting punches, only thing is maybe some more personals but wiv a kid like this there may not be a lot to rip on.

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