the real man of steel
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Voted For: Orion.
V/Orion....this was a good battle....o he gets my vote cause he had better personals wit his punchs an his structure was easier to read....hot u had some good lines but u need to work on the structure its hard to folow u need to come wit more personals an harder diss's...No Hate...RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=O
closer=O
structure=O
vocab=O
punchs=O
overall=Orion.
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