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Old 03-23-05, 02:23 PM   #18
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Voted For: LexiKon

ayo Overall

Lexikon - decent drop my nig...just returning an honest vote.. felt like you came out with an overall decent verse...had a few good metas and some punches...keep doin what you doin...

Work on...um just get some work done on you structure yo...

best line in my opinion was tha mariah line...

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Messaih - well um you had some lines in there..but like alot of people in this site it didnt have much substance...s

work on....your strucuture is mad fucked up yo, and go read some tutorials...and youll do fine..

best line - tha last one because it was the end....

V/ LEXIKON...

no need to rtf....
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