Chaos- you got a fucked up rhyme scheeme "My pens dence commence suspence-like intensed tumors....." if ya said that shit into a mic you'd sound like a fool. I thought this line was clever even though Im not a big fan of gun talk "I stay wit a 9 and a 45, you niggas would think I was a quarter to 10....." A bit too much gangsta talk but not too bad.
Buck-a-shot- Wasn't liking this verse bit boring lacked complexity structure, flow and rhyme scheeme where ok. Not much to say bout this verse
Overall- Chaos won
Oh well I cant vote just typed all that shit for nothing
It would be nice if you returned the favor anyway. plz
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