Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

to me, this one easily goes to mista,

mista-good:i liked the metaphors, similes, werdplay, and punches, you also had a nice structure and flow, the links also made this verse more catchy and made the punches have more meaning
bad:i didnt really like the opener OR closer, i also felt like you cood have upped the multies, and vocab

judicial-good:i liekd the multies that WERE in there, i also think that you beat your opponent in vocab,
bad:your structure wasnt good because of some strectched lines, felt like your puinches just didnt hit hard in this verse, i also didnt like your opener or closer either
both:both shood try to mainly work on your openers and closers

opner:tie
closer:tie
multies:J
flow:M
punches:M
werdplay:M
vocab:J

rtf....links in sig

v/mista_auth3ntiq