yo it's aight u need ta elevate though..was a lil choppy and punchlines were a lil weak i'm not hatin i'm just sayin work on ur raps a lil more and never give up at it....tell u the truth i was probably the wackest emcee on this site when i first came but i fuckin put everything aside and worked at it and i elevated lots since then and i'm still workin at it...i'm not a pro yet but if u want some help i'll make an attempt ta help u..pm if u do need help till then keep workin at it and i forgot ta mention u need ta work on ur structure a lil bit but u ok for a beginner