Voted For: Buck.Shot

choas
your stucutre really was weak, your punchlines were very good tho, not so many personals but a few that i liked, what you lack on is creativty, i wasnt seeing to much nice creative stuff in there, n the syllable count wasnt there somtimes..but not bad

Esco
uh not sure who you are o yea arent you buck shot hmm, anyway shit that was good nice stucuture, nice syllable count, good punchlines alot of creativty, im liking that, pretty good shit, the punches were what got you the win tho..pz

RTF in my battle vs drama queen links in the sig pz

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