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Old 03-23-05, 07:50 PM   #9
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Voted For: Young Blaze

Sorry dfunk, this is better than the other battle i seen of you but still some way to elevate to go yet.

dfunk's opener wasnt really good, the punch wasnt hitting very hard. You must remember man that the opener has to be one of the best bars of the verse. The closer was ok. nice meta about the dick and mic "get off it" -was dope but not a good closer. Ya punches are ok, not finishing off well is your biggest flaw. Word ya verse better, check out other battles and you'l learn. Stay up bro.

Young Blaze had a good opener, two metaphors in there and it connected well. Closer was ok aswel but i think you tried too hard with the metaphor the quality of the punch was let go a bit. You had some multis and personal i think with some really good punches and your flow was real good, easily read and enoyable

well done peeps