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Old 03-23-05, 11:58 PM   #14
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Voted For: tranz$cript

uh shit eh

going with transcripts.....dfunk...your stuff didnt rhyme on many occasion, your structure was horrible, not really any punches...stretched lines, gotta elevate alot, word, learn how to diss

aight, transcriptz, your shit was whack too, homosexual line was your best, but it was only decent, so you need to elevate too...but you get the vote because your shit flowed nicely, structure was decent, actually had punches, few persoonals, overal, one sided, but still pretty whack....no offense or hate, but elevate, lots of room for it,,,,,,sorrry to be so harsh, but yeah, the truth.......

v/transcriptz
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