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Old 03-24-05, 12:13 AM   #6
Kordozar
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Wow Both Verse Wass Wacc Seriously...................

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Build A Rhyme..Cuz I Could Tell U Aint A Lyric Child..
And Ill "Salute" U Da Loss..And I Don Think Da "Military" "Mindz"..
^^ Didn't Rhyme And Punch Wass Played 1/10

Treat Him Like A "Fetus"..U Need Anotha "Hole" To Rest In?..
Had His Shit Pre-Written..Dats Y He Was So Swift To Check In..

^^^ Best Bar Between Each Competitors Punch Wass Ok 6/10

Him Winnin Is Rare..Like Loyal Preist Thats Strapped..
And B..Im The "Military" "Minded" One..U Should See The Wins "I Rack"(Iraq)..
^^^ Wack 2 Bars Above You Just Used The Same Personal Punch Wass Ok And It Wass Streched 5/10

U Da Best?..I Highly Dispense From That..
Flowz Said Only "Ill" Heads In His Crew..I Guess He Meant "Mental" Cats..
^^Ok Punch Not That Good And It Wass Stretched 4/10

We Cant "Hang"..With Newbies..Like "Killin" Children On A "Vine..
I Role With The Full "Click"..But He Just Role With "Mili" On His "Mind"..
^^^ Wack You Juss Used The Same Personal 3 Times 2/10

Kyleon Ya Verse Wass Wack 4rm Beginning Till End You Started Off With A Punch That Doesn't Make Sence And It Wass Played..You Didn't Have Any Special Personals,No Vocab Wordplay No,Nor Did You Have Creativity Elivate Your Verse A Whole Lot

/v ::..:$lobK::..: Return The Favor...............
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