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Old 03-24-05, 10:28 AM   #1048
Dirty Nigga
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^^^
strobe a few typos that need fixin'

in the last line before i said ''^^^ unlimited lines''

the first word should be ''ya'' not 'y'...could u add the A?

an in the very last line of my verse, i typed U instead of I in one place, just read the last line an you'll know which one of the U's you need ta fix..
change it too an I

U wouldne shit if I passed u thru the instestine system

thanks strobe

Peace out

Fixed
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