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Old 03-24-05, 11:49 AM   #9
Acuity
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From: East London, (Hackney)
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yo the beat is dope, i always thought it was ill.......

quality is quite bad...ur flow is ok, feels rushed a lot, like u had more time ont he beat and didint use it....lyrical content is pretty simple, i.e no multis, rhymeschemes......the hook is okay for a 12 yr old singin shell b dope in time, but in the grand scheme of things it aint that effective or catchy in my opinion....if this is your second ever track this is so dope comapred to shit i was spittin..keep em comin homie

RTF on my Mad Dog Diss....where you may have recieved a mention lol
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