Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

aight, this shit wasn't bad, heres what i see

>On da real hommie,ya raps bunch of jokes like warner brother
On stage and pulled off a 'B-Rad',I tryed to warn-the-brother
-nah, 2nd line was bunk....cause its a t-shirt 4/10
>Part of the lyrical saigonz?,no wonder that crew is so wack
Break it down stat by stat,plain N simple 'the verse' is what ya lack
-not bad...decent 6/10
>And when it comes to punches,ya always have 'etchnical' problems
Like mike jones he gives away his # to labels but they never call him
-nah, wasn't feelin it...worded poorly 5/10
>Ya battle stats has a 'virus',since its 'invested' with newbies
So really he aint hard he's more like 'soft meat',he's all 'chewy'
good personal...hit decent 7/10
>The lastbar isnt a thing for skilled rappers,so go get a ghost writer
Cuz slobk verse couldnt 'hangover' mine if he pulled a 'all nighter'....werd
haha...best line here....8/10

-overall: 30/50....not a bad verse man....good flow and structure, decent consistency, thought your last two bars were the best, they hit the hardest, and good personal and good punch....but your opener bars i felt is what killed ya...nothin really too special/stood out....and therefore, i think you just couldn't pull this win out, no hate or anything, decent verse, but slobk's was better

slobk

>Build A Rhyme..Cuz I Could Tell U Aint A Lyric Child..
And Ill "Salute" U Da Loss..And I Don Think Da "Military" "Mindz"..
-not a bad meta/concept here....kinda sucked cause it didnt rhyme 6/10
>Treat Him Like A "Fetus"..U Need Anotha "Hole" To Rest In?..
Had His Shit Pre-Written..Dats Y He Was So Swift To Check In..
-decent, nothing special 6/10
>Him Winnin Is Rare..Like Loyal Preist Thats Strapped..
And B..Im The "Military" "Minded" One..U Should See The Wins "I Rack"(Iraq)..
-best bar here, it was fire, first line coulda been better though 8/10
>U Da Best?..I Highly Dispense From That..
Flowz Said Only "Ill" Heads In His Crew..I Guess He Meant "Mental" Cats..
-another decent bar, good personal 7/10
>We Cant "Hang"..With Newbies..Like "Killin" Children On A "Vine..
I Role With The Full "Click"..But He Just Role With "Mili" On His "Mind"..
haha, good closer 7/10

overall: 34/50.....same thing with you man, great last 3 bars, really picked up....althought you had the worst structure outta the two of you, you made up for it in punches/personals...thought your shit hit harder, specially at the end there.....decent wordplay, creative stuff in there, thats good to see, kept consistent disses, which is good, this was somewhat close, but i think you took this one......better wordplay, harder punches/personals......although, i hate how you use the " " all the time, its really distracting reading your verse....wordizzle.....good battle....no hate

v/slobk

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